[Art Week #12] Any ideas how to improve this before I start with the lineart?

[Art Week #12] Any ideas how to improve this before I start with the lineart?

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Sexy chick

Sexy chick

NSFW_GIF, feelthemup

Twerk that shit!

Twerk that shit!

GWNerdy

Ankles crossed

Ankles crossed

feet

Large [f]ont and breasts ;)

Large [f]ont and breasts ;)

gonewild

Yippie Kai-Yeah

Yippie Kai-Yeah

nsfw, Boobies, boobs

Had ourselves a little (f)un to start our (m)orning. (First Post to GWCouples)

Had ourselves a little (f)un to start our (m)orning. (First Post to GWCouples)

GWCouples

Hot vader

Hot vader

nsfw_gifs

Co(m)e help me start my day

Co(m)e help me start my day

gonewild

Black & White Seduction

Black & White Seduction

GoneWildCD, TS_Feet

Tits [F]or days ;)

Tits [F]or days ;)

gonewild

cheeky sneak! I really love this bra...enjoy :) (f)

cheeky sneak! I really love this bra...enjoy :) (f)

gonewild

to keep the shorts on, or take them off... [f]

to keep the shorts on, or take them off... [f]

asstastic, HungryButts

Rei Ayanami

Rei Ayanami

nsfwcosplay

[F]uck me from behind!

[F]uck me from behind!

gonewild

My soapy boobies (f)

My soapy boobies (f)

gonewild